The Past always comes back...
And she lay on the floor. Motionless. Drenched in the pool
of her own blood. Dead. She had been lying stiff on the ground for two hours
before the police came. Her face was completely pale, her eyes were bulging and
there were marks of strangulation on her neck. She had been ruthlessly
murdered. Sheldon was sitting right next
to her. Sobbing. The police started asking him questions but he was in shock. He
had seen the entire crime take place and couldn’t do anything to save her.
Dim lights, skinny women, attractive men, loud music and an
inexhaustible supply of cheap alcohol. Well, it was June’s birthday. She had
turned 18, and her best friend Elizabeth threw this party for her. It was a huge success. Everybody had an amazing
time. Sheldon and Josh were responsible for the Bar, and they did an amazing
job. Suddenly a man in the mid thirties entered the house and took out a gun. Pin
drop silence. He screamed saying, “ Elizabeth!! Where are you? Look what we
have here? A party, eh? And I wasn’t invited?”
He went towards Elizabeth, took her by the arm and pushed her out of the
house. No one moved. Elizabeth didn’t even look scared. She wasn’t intimidated
by a man with a gun. She had handled too many men with guns to be scared of a
puny and skinny man with a gun. She pushed him roughly and said,” What do you
want?” He smiled in a dubious sort of way and said,” I know you killed a man. You
shot him. And at that point of time you were in such a dire need for drugs that
Jeffrey manipulated you, and you killed his only enemy. I just came here to say
hello to a pretty lady.”
Elizabeth was a drug
addict and had been clean for 5 years now. She had some very bitter enemies
because of her addiction to marijuana. But June had always been the more mature
person, she had always been the girl who everybody respected, and Elizabeth was
jealous of that. She was jealous of the fact that June was more popular than
her, and that even her parents absolutely adored June. However, June was never
jealous of Elizabeth. She was always there when Elizabeth needed her,
especially during the years she was trying to quit. She never had any negative
feeling towards Elizabeth. Sheldon was
in love with Elizabeth and Josh and June were going to get married very
soon.
Before Elizabeth met Sheldon, she was in a relationship with
a man called Jeffrey. He was a drug lord and she didn’t know about this, until
one day she saw him kill a man. He was the one who introduced her to drugs. He took
advantage of her being vulnerable. Deep within, Elizabeth was scared of Jeffrey
because she knew that he had the ability to kill her. She wanted to quit doing
drugs but Jeffrey’s presence made it impossible. One day, she was very high on
drugs when Jeffrey came to her and said that there was a very bad man, who was
ruining his business. And that he needed to be taken care of. Elizabeth had no
idea of what was happening, and before she knew it, she was in a car, with a
gun in her hand. The next thing she saw was that there was a man standing
infront of her. His face was covered with a black cloth and Jeffrey kept
telling her to pull the trigger and shoot him. In her daze, she just asked ‘why’
once, and Jeffrey replied saying that it was just a game and everybody was
testing whether she had the ability to do such a grave act. She pulled the trigger.
The man fell to the ground. Bleeding. It was a dark alley. Jeffrey caught hold
of her, literally threw her into the back seat of the car and they sped away. The
next day when she woke up, she didn’t remember anything concrete. She had
various images in her head. Car. Dark alley. Man. Gun. She thought that she had
been hallucinating and let it go. After a year, Elizabeth decided to run away
from Jeffrey’s grasp, and she went to the police. She told them that he was a
drug lord and that she was scared that he might kill her and that she needed
police protection. They asked her for his address and caught him and put him into
jail for five years.
5 years and 3 months later, the shady looking man had come
into her house. Elizabeth knew that Jeffrey was out of jail. Jeffrey knew that
she had given him up to the police. And she knew that he would come back for
revenge. The party was still going on. Elizabeth came back into the house. Everybody
was staring at her. June was crying. Pin drop silence and then Elizabeth
apologised to June and said that everything was sorted and that there was
nothing to worry about. Everyone was drunk, so they started talking to one
another again. Music started playing, and everything was back to normal.
The next day Elizabeth went to the local police station and
told them that she had in danger of being murdered and that she needed constant
patrolling outside her house. They listened to her case and said that they
would do all that they could. To the best of their ability. Elizabeth parked
her car in her garage and saw an unknown car that had been parked a few blocks
away. She saw June’s car and Sheldon’s bike parked right next to her garage. She
went up towards her room and when she opened the door, she saw Sheldon crying
and June was lying on the ground. When she went closer, she saw what had really
happened. June lay on the floor. Motionless. Drenched in the pool of her own
blood. Dead. She had been lying stiff on the ground for two hours before the
police came. Her face was completely pale, her eyes were bulging and there were
marks of strangulation on her neck. She had been ruthlessly murdered. Sheldon was sitting right next to her. Sobbing.
The police started asking him questions but he was in shock. He had seen the
entire crime take place and couldn’t do anything to save her. Elizabeth was
shocked. She knew exactly who was behind this, but there was no conclusive proof
of Jeffrey’s hand in the crime. She told the police that she was sure it was
either done by Jeffrey or by one of his men. They told her that they didn’t have
enough evidence to convict anybody and that they would take Jeffrey into
custody. That’s all they could do. Sheldon looked at Elizabeth and said,” YOU
BETRAYED HER.” She trusted you. We are over.
Elizabeth was trembling with anger. She took out her gun,
put it in her back pocket and drove towards Jeffrey’s hideout. She knew he
would be waiting for her. She walked through his front porch, entered the
house, and as soon as she opened the door, he caught her head and hit it on a
wall. She fell to the ground, her head bleeding. Barely conscious. He kicked her. He
took out his gun and before he could shoot her, she took out her handgun and shot
him right between his eyes. He shot her back and the bullet pierced her chest. She
had one last chance. She needed to finish him off. She gathered all the
strength that she had and shot him right through his heart... They both died. She
closed her eyes with a smile on her face.
I like how you begin and end the story with the same paragraph. I really like that.
ReplyDeletethank you shreya.. :D
ReplyDeleteAmazing, but two facts in the last para are a bit contradicting, dont you think?
ReplyDeleteShe shot him after she was "unconscious", and he shot her after he'd been shot b/w the eyes?
The rest actually gave me goosebumps. Good one. (y)
hey thanks.. and yes u pointed the flaw. :p anyway, thank you for that... i shall change that now
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